Bonne Nouvelle by John Arthur Sweet

mardi, le 16 mai, l’an deux mille vingt-trois

à environ treize heures trente-deux minutes

and I’m in the Paris metro when I hear

a disembodied voice intone, Bonne Nouvelle,

and the carriage jerks and shudders and slows

who knows what form it might take, this bonne nouvelle,

si bonne that it must be announced baldly,

sans nuance, before we’re even quite here,

in the next station, while we’re still hurtling,

innocently, through the Ligne 9 atmosphere

I start off modest: fares will be reduced

on the Paris metro. That’s the bonne nouvelle,

visit www. for details

then I escalate rapidly: peace in Ukraine

or: cellphones won’t work henceforth, there’s a hitch,

and we need to look at one another again

then I go richly metaphysical


so this is how it manifests, I think,

no heav’ns op’ning, no trumpets sounding,

just a brief énoncé, in French, en route

from a queer bookstore to Le Corbusier’s

house that shares his vision of Paradise

as a rational abode, uncluttered, 

unified, filled with light, and purposeful

in my father’s house are many mansions,

and here we go, it’s happening, between

Strasbourg–St-Denis and Grands Boulevards,

time for some interior decorating

assuming I find myself at the end

of a charitable interpretation

who’d have thought, after all this time

all the unfulfilled promises, the malaise

a mansion to inhabit, with cool friends


but as pregnant seconds accumulate 

and we drift into another station

whose name doesn’t quite percolate, I think:

perhaps I’m being overly ambitious

maybe the bonne nouvelle is nothing more

than the fact I’m here, that it’s not hell, and

this spell I’m in leaves me free to speculate

just exactly what kind of bonne nouvelle

it would be that I’d most appreciate


John Arthur Sweet is a Montreal-based writer/performer, mostly of theatrical monologues. In May, he was an invited artist at PLU. He began "Bonne Nouvelle" during his five-day visit to Paris, and shared an initial version of it at the PLU Open Mic. His website is johnarthursweet.online.

Photo credit: Lux Praguensis

Posted on December 14th 2023

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